Ce corrigé enjeux de la communication reprend les onze exercices dans l’ordre. Les explications vous aident à comprendre chaque erreur et le paragraphe modèle montre ce qu’on attend au bac.
La correction détaillée
Le corrigé enjeux de la communication, exercice par exercice
Correction de l’exercice 1 : Le vocabulaire de l’information- d
- f : erreur de bonne foi.
- a : volonté de tromper.
- g
- e
- c
- h
- b
- inner
- outer : langue officielle héritée de la colonisation.
- expanding
- outer
- inner
- expanding
- outer
- inner : l’anglais y est langue maternelle de la majorité.
- tricolon : trois groupes rythmés (Lincoln, 1863).
- antithesis : opposition « ton pays pour toi / toi pour ton pays ».
- rhetorical question
- alliteration : le son /b/ répété trois fois.
- anaphora
- inclusive “we”
- “We shall fight” is repeated: it is an anaphora.
- “We”: it unites the speaker, the MPs and the whole nation in a common struggle.
- France, the seas and oceans, the air, the island, the beaches, the landing grounds, the fields, the streets, the hills: they move closer and closer to Britain, as if the enemy were invading step by step.
- “whatever the cost may be”
- “we shall never surrender” breaks the pattern: it is short, negative and absolute, so it sounds like a final promise.
- It was reported and later broadcast on BBC radio, which carried Churchill’s words into every home.
- misinformation : bonne foi.
- disinformation
- misinformation : erreur corrigée.
- disinformation
- misinformation
- disinformation : trucage volontaire.
- went viral
- trending
- followers
- algorithm
- debunked
- check the source
- The Prime Minister delivered a moving speech.
- This is a useful piece of information.
- Social media have blurred the line between information and opinion.
- Conspiracy theories thrive on distrust.
- English is a global lingua franca today. (ou Today, English is…)
- The speaker appeals to emotions rather than facts.
- This information is false / wrong. (indénombrable, verbe au singulier)
- News travels fast on social media.
- The president delivered / gave a moving speech.
- More than half of English speakers are not native speakers.
- Algorithms lock us in filter bubbles.
- You should always check the source before sharing.
- La rumeur est devenue virale avant que quiconque puisse la vérifier.
- L’anglais n’appartient plus seulement aux Britanniques.
- Les vérificateurs ont démenti l’affirmation en quelques heures.
- Le slogan était court, accrocheur et facile à scander.
- De nombreuses langues minoritaires sont menacées.
- I read an interesting piece of information about Churchill.
- The news is often alarming.
- She delivered / gave a speech in front of Parliament.
- He is very sensitive to criticism on Twitter.
- Fake news spreads faster than true stories. (pas de more avec -er)
- English is spoken all over the world. (voix passive)
Exemple de réponse :
In 1940, Churchill’s voice reached millions of British homes only because the BBC chose to broadcast it. Today, any politician can speak directly to voters with a single post. In a way, social media have made political communication more democratic: citizens can reply, criticise and even launch their own movements, as the young climate activists did with a simple hashtag. However, this freedom comes at a price. Algorithms reward outrage, so the most extreme messages spread fastest, and disinformation campaigns can manipulate elections. Short soundbites have replaced long arguments, and many users never leave their echo chambers. In short, social media have given everyone a microphone, but not everyone a fair hearing. Communication is more open than ever, yet democracy needs more than openness: it needs reliable information and genuine debate.
Comment progresser après ce corrigé
Notez les noms indénombrables qui vous ont piégé (information, news, advice) et reprenez les procédés rhétoriques avec un exemple chacun. Pour l’oral, entraînez-vous à lire l’extrait de Churchill à voix haute en marquant les pauses : vous comprendrez mieux pourquoi l’anaphore fonctionne.