Voici le corrigé du contrôle diversité inclusion, avec les réponses attendues, les justifications et la répartition des 20 points.
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Correction détaillée : corrigé du contrôle diversité inclusion
Correction de l’exercice 1 : Lexique (4 points)0,5 point par réponse. 1. housing. 2. opportunity. 3. inclusive. 4. quota. 5. prejudice. 6. equality. 7. bias. 8. minority.
1 point par réponse. 1. Social housing stands next to the luxury flats. 2. They wanted to bring people of different incomes together. 3. Because residents rarely meet: children attend different schools and a fence divides the park. 4. He/She suggests shared spaces such as a library, a market and a football pitch open to everyone. 5. They think it was a good first step, but not enough. Retirer 0,5 point si la phrase est incomplète.
1 point par phrase (position claire et formulation correcte). Exemple : Affirmative action can correct past injustice. However, some people think it ignores individual merit. In my view, it works best when it is temporary and combined with better schooling.
1 point par phrase. 1. Indigenous peoples are asking for better representation on television. 2. Social mixing cannot be decreed. (ou You can’t force social mix). 3. She was discriminated against because of her accent. (ou She was a victim of discrimination).
Réponse modèle : I do not think that laws alone can create an inclusive society. Firstly, a law can forbid discrimination, but it cannot change attitudes overnight. Secondly, inclusion needs places where people meet daily. For example, the Civil Rights Act ended legal segregation in the United States, yet inequalities in housing and schools remained for decades.
Critères : position claire (1 point), deux arguments (2 points), exemple pertinent (1 point), langue (1 point).
Barème et conseils
Total : 20 points. Au-dessus de 14, le thème est bien maîtrisé ; entre 10 et 14, revoir le lexique de l’égalité ; sous 10, reprendre les notions clés. Erreurs fréquentes : traduire littéralement mixité, confondre prejudice et bias, omettre la nuance dans une réponse argumentée.

