Voici le corrigé texte littéraire. Les réponses sont en gras ; pour les questions d’analyse, il s’agit de réponses modèles : d’autres formulations sont acceptables si elles s’appuient sur le texte et expliquent l’effet.
La correction détaillée du corrigé texte littéraire
Correction de l’exercice 1 : Le vocabulaire de l’analyse- a novel : b
- a short story : e
- a character : g
- the setting : a
- the narrator : h
- a play : c
- the tone : f
- an excerpt : d
- 1st (I)
- 3rd (Tom)
- 1st (We, our)
- 3rd (she)
- 1st (My, I)
- 3rd (The old man, his)
- O : le narrateur connaît les pensées des deux personnages.
- E : seulement des actions visibles, aucune pensée.
- I : on est dans la tête de Ben (discours indirect libre : Would she ever come back?).
- E : description extérieure, comme une caméra.
- O : le narrateur entre dans tous les esprits à la fois.
- personification (la maison « gémit »)
- simile (as fast as)
- metaphor (son cœur est une boîte fermée à clé)
- hyperbole
- oxymoron (sweet sorrow)
- alliteration (répétition du son /f/)
- V : il dit le contraire de ce qu’il pense.
- D : le public sait ce que le roi ignore.
- S : l’inverse de ce qu’on attendrait d’un inspecteur de sécurité.
- V
- D
- Indirect: the narrator never says what she is like; we deduce it from her actions and words.
- She arrives twenty minutes late without apologising; she sighs loudly when the speaker hesitates (ou : she keeps a seat for her handbag).
- It suggests that she judges people by their appearance and looks down on the woman.
- No, it is only taken by her handbag: her polite « I’m afraid » hides a lie, which reveals her snobbery and selfishness.
- arrogant, rude, snobbish (ou selfish, cold, contemptuous)
- It shows the consequence of her attitude: she ends up isolated, which is ironic, since she wanted to keep others away.
- The narrator is the son, looking back on his childhood; it is a first-person narrator.
- « The factory swallowed my father… and spat him out »: the factory becomes a monster that devours the father, which conveys the violence of work.
- « like tired soldiers »: the workers seem exhausted and defeated, as if they had fought a battle. (autre comparaison : heavy as a stone, pour la main du père)
- It implies that factory work is a hidden, unfair fight that destroys men without anyone recognising it.
- He is unhappy and resigned: he is « grey and silent », never talks about it, and hopes his son will « do better than this ».
- The short sentences create a shock: the adult narrator reveals the child’s innocence and suggests, with some irony, that the promise may never have come true.
- The narrator is a little boy who waits for his father. (auteur ≠ narrateur)
- The narrator describes the factory as a monster. (présent de l’analyse)
- In line 3, there is a metaphor which suggests that… (toujours donner l’effet)
- This sentence shows the personality of the father. (character = personnage)
- The writer uses a simile to describe the men.
- In my opinion, the text is moving / poignant. (according to me est incorrect ; un adjectif plus précis vaut mieux que sad)
- The narrator is a character in the story.
- The excerpt is told in the first person.
- This metaphor suggests that the character feels trapped.
- The reader knows more than the hero: this is dramatic irony.
- The tone of the ending is nostalgic.
- The author highlights the contrast between the two characters.
Ordre : 2 – 4 – 1 – 5 – 3.
- The narrator presents work as destructive. (Point)
- Indeed, he writes that the factory « swallowed my father every morning » (l. 1). (Evidence)
- This metaphor turns the factory into a monster that devours people. (Explanation)
- Its victims come out « grey and silent », as if their life had been drained away. (Explanation, suite)
- The text therefore criticises the dehumanising effect of industrial labour. (conclusion)
Exemple de réponse :
The passage is told by a third-person narrator who focuses on Clara. At first, the point of view seems external, since we only see her actions. The repetition of « every » (« every joke, every glass, every name ») shows how hard she works to please others: she is the perfect hostess. However, the ending creates a strong contrast. Once « the last guest had gone », the noisy party gives way to silence and darkness, and Clara sits « alone among the empty bottles ». The empty bottles may symbolise her own inner emptiness. Her refusal to « turn on the light » suggests sadness or exhaustion. The text therefore reveals that Clara’s cheerfulness is a mask: the « triumph » everyone talks about is ironic, as it hides deep loneliness.
Comment progresser après ce corrigé
Relis tes réponses en vérifiant trois réflexes : distinguer auteur et narrateur, écrire au présent, et accompagner chaque procédé de son effet. Ensuite, prends un court passage de roman que tu aimes et rédige deux paragraphes PEE : c’est l’entraînement le plus efficace pour l’épreuve écrite.

