Ce corrigé argumentation détaille chaque réponse. Pour les exercices de production, il propose un modèle : ton texte peut être différent, à condition de respecter le plan et d’utiliser correctement les mots de liaison.
La correction détaillée
Correction de l’exercice 1 : D’accord, pas d’accord ou nuancé ?- Exactly! : agree
- I’m not convinced. : disagree
- It depends. : in between
- I’m in favour of it. : agree
- I see your point, but… : in between
- I don’t think so. : disagree
- That’s true. : agree
- I partly agree. : in between
- I’m against homework because it takes too much time. (suivi d’un sujet + verbe)
- Many students are tired because of their screens. (suivi d’un nom)
- Uniforms are a good idea because everybody looks the same.
- The match was cancelled because of the storm.
- I like this rule because it protects younger students.
- She changed her mind because of his arguments.
- Although video games are fun, they can be addictive. (although relie deux propositions dans une même phrase)
- Phones are useful. However, they distract students. (however commence une nouvelle phrase, suivi d’une virgule)
- My brother loves uniforms, whereas I hate them. (whereas compare deux personnes)
- Although it is expensive, a school trip is a great experience.
- Homework helps us revise. However, too much homework is stressful.
- Some students prefer online lessons, whereas others prefer real classrooms.
- I agree with you. (agree est un verbe)
- In my opinion, uniforms are useless.
- On the one hand, it’s cheap.
- Do you like it? I think so.
- Despite the rain, we went out. (ou In spite of)
- She disagrees with her parents. (verbe au présent, 3e personne : -s)
- The main advantage is the price.
- I’m against the new rule. (pas de to après against)
- Phones distract students, so they learn less.
- Sport is good for your health. What’s more, it is fun.
- Some subjects, such as maths, are difficult.
- The canteen is noisy. That’s why students can’t relax.
- Although the trip is expensive, it is very interesting.
- Cycling is good for the planet, whereas driving pollutes.
Corrigé argumentation : documents et production
Correction de l’exercice 6 : Pour ou contre l’uniforme ?- for (moins de moqueries)
- against (pas de personnalité)
- for (moins de dépenses de mode)
- against
- for
- against (coût pour les familles nombreuses)
- for (sentiment d’appartenance)
- against
- Should the school day finish at 3 p.m.?
- He is for the idea. (I’m totally in favour of it)
- They would have more time for sport and music (or they would be less tired).
- Because they would have shorter holidays.
- Many parents work until 6 p.m., so younger students would be alone at home.
- It’s a good idea, but only if the school offers activities in the afternoon.
- Paragraphe 1 : b (introduction et question)
- Paragraphe 2 : e (On the one hand : arguments pour)
- Paragraphe 3 : a (On the other hand : arguments contre)
- Paragraphe 4 : d (Moreover ajoute un argument contre)
- Paragraphe 5 : c (To conclude)
Exemples de réponses :
- I see your point, but homework helps us remember what we learnt in class.
- I disagree because phones help teenagers stay in touch with their parents.
- I see your point, but students should learn to choose a balanced diet themselves.
- I see your point, but we would finish too late in the evening.
- I disagree because books help us improve our vocabulary and imagination.
- I agree with you.
- On the one hand, it’s useful; on the other hand, it’s expensive.
- Some people think that homework is useless.
- In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the drawbacks.
- I’m against banning phones. (against + verbe en -ing)
- To conclude, I think it’s a good idea.
Exemple de rédaction :
- Nowadays, most students have homework every evening. Should homework be banned?
- On the one hand, homework takes a lot of time. For instance, some students work for two hours after school.
- Moreover, not all students get help at home, so homework can be unfair.
- On the other hand, homework helps us revise and remember our lessons.
- What’s more, it teaches us to work alone, for example when we prepare for a test.
- To conclude, I don’t think homework should be banned, because it is useful, but teachers should give less of it.
Comment progresser après ce corrigé
Relis tes erreurs de l’exercice 4 : ce sont celles que les correcteurs du brevet voient le plus souvent. Apprends par cœur cinq expressions sûres (On the one hand, On the other hand, I agree because, However, To conclude) et réutilise-les dans chaque rédaction. Enfin, entraîne-toi à l’oral avec un proche : choisissez un sujet du quotidien et défendez chacun un camp pendant deux minutes.

