Retrouve ici le corrigé écrire un récit, réponse par réponse. Les explications rappellent pourquoi on choisit tel temps ou tel connecteur, et la dernière correction te propose une histoire complète à imiter.
La correction détaillée
Corrigé écrire un récit : réponses et explications
Correction de l’exercice 1 : Les verbes irréguliers- go : went
- see : saw
- hear : heard
- fall : fell
- catch : caught
- feel : felt
- leave : left
- find : found
- We arrived at the campsite at six.
- My dad put up the tent. (put est identique au prétérit)
- Then we made a fire.
- I didn’t sleep well that night.
- Did you hear the owl? (base verbale après did)
- In the morning, we swam in the lake.
- It was snowing when we left the house. (décor, puis action)
- While Emma was reading, the phone rang. (action en cours interrompue)
- The birds were singing and the sun was shining. (deux éléments de décor)
- I dropped my bag and ran away. (actions successives)
- We were having dinner when the lights went out.
- He opened the letter, read it and smiled. (trois actions qui se suivent)
- One day, a strange letter arrived at our house.
- I opened it. Then I read it again, very slowly.
- While I was reading, my sister came in.
- Suddenly, we heard footsteps upstairs.
- As soon as we saw the shadow, we hid under the table.
- Luckily, it was only our cat!
- In the end, we laughed about it for hours.
Ordre : 2 – 4 – 5 – 6 – 1 – 3.
- Last summer, Tom and I rented a small boat in Cornwall. (situation initiale)
- At first, the sea was calm and we were having fun.
- Suddenly, the engine stopped and the wind started to blow. (problème)
- We were really scared because we were far from the coast.
- Luckily, a fisherman saw us and towed us back to the harbour. (résolution)
- In the end, we were tired but very proud of our adventure. (fin)
- thrilled
- disappointed
- terrified
- relieved
- amazed
- nervous
- Where did they go?
- What did she see?
- When did you leave?
- Who found the treasure? Pas de did : who est sujet.
- Why was he scared? Avec be, on inverse sans did.
- Yesterday, I went to the beach.
- We didn’t find the path.
- While I was walking in the forest, I heard a noise.
- Did you see the fox?
- After that (ou Afterwards), we went home.
- I was very relieved when I saw my parents.
- Eventually signifie « finalement » : Maybe we will go to London next week.
- One day, we went to the seaside.
- It was raining and the wind was blowing.
- Suddenly, I saw a shadow.
- My heart was beating fast.
- Luckily, my brother arrived.
- In the end, we were relieved.
- They were in Edinburgh, visiting the castle with their class.
- The guide was talking about Mary, Queen of Scots.
- It was dark and cold, and water was dripping from the walls.
- The door slammed behind them.
- Ben was terrified.
- She used her phone as a torch.
- No, she wasn’t: « Their teacher was furious ».
Exemple de réponse modèle :
- Suddenly, all the lights went out.
- My heart was beating fast and my hands were shaking.
- Then I took a torch and went into the kitchen.
- The rain was hitting the windows and the wind was howling.
- While I was looking for candles, someone knocked on the door.
- Luckily, it was only my neighbour, who wanted to check on me.
- In the end, we drank hot chocolate together and I felt relieved.
Comment progresser après ce corrigé
Relis tes récits en trois passages : un pour les verbes (prétérit correct, base verbale après did), un pour les connecteurs (pas deux fois le même), un pour les détails (au moins un lieu décrit et une émotion montrée). Tiens aussi une liste de tes verbes irréguliers fautifs et révise-la chaque semaine : c’est là que se cachent la plupart des points perdus.

