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Corrigé contrôle lettre de candidature : correction détaillée
Correction de l’exercice 1 : Formules de la lettre (4 points)1. I am writing to apply for. 2. I have enclosed. 3. Dear Sir or Madam. 4. I would be grateful if. 5. Yours faithfully. 6. I look forward to hearing from you. 2/3 de point par item.
1. I would like to apply for a position in your shop. 2. Could you please tell me when the interview will take place? 3. Thank you very much for your time. 1 point par phrase.
1. have worked (ou have been working). 2. helped. 3. give. 1 point par item.
1. The summer job at the sports centre. 2. Basketball. 3. Sam helped to coach younger children. 4. From July to August. 1 point par réponse.
1. I am writing to apply for the position of waiter. 2. I am serious and motivated. 3. I would be available from June. 1 point par phrase.
Lettre modèle : Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the summer job at your ice-cream shop. I am fifteen and I am very motivated. Last summer, I worked in my uncle’s café and I learned to serve customers. I am friendly and punctual. I would be available in July and August. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Anna Brown. Critères : structure et formules (1), contenu (1), langue (1).
Barème et conseils
Total : 20 points. Sous 10 : relire les formules fixes. De 10 à 15 : soigner le registre. Erreurs fréquentes : formules de politesse mal assorties (Dear Sir … Yours sincerely), registre familier, oublier les coordonnées.