Ce corrigé grands discours reprend chaque exercice dans l’ordre. Pour les questions d’analyse, plusieurs formulations sont possibles : l’important est de citer le texte et de nommer correctement le procédé.
La correction détaillée
Correction de l’exercice 1 : Qui a dit quoi ?- King (Washington, 1963)
- Churchill (Londres, 1940)
- Obama (slogan de 2008)
- Lincoln (Gettysburg, 1863)
- Malala (Nations unies, 2013)
- Kennedy (investiture, 1961)
- The speaker stood in front of the microphone.
- A huge crowd was waiting in the park.
- She delivered her speech at the United Nations.
- The audience listened in silence.
- When he finished, people cheered and clapped.
- It was so moving that some people cried.
- Rule of three (air, water, cities)
- Call to action (Let’s act now)
- Rhetorical question (on n’attend pas de réponse)
- Inclusive we (together, we, our)
- Contrast (the end / the beginning)
- Repetition (We will not… répété trois fois)
- FREEdom
- GOVernment
- toGETHer
- eQUALity (accent avant -ity)
- deMOCracy
- toMORrow
- surRENder
- eduCAtion (accent avant -tion)
Exemples de réponses :
- We need more teachers, more books and more schools.
- I am speaking for the girls of my village, for the boys of my town and for all the children of the world.
- Be brave, be kind and be proud.
- We will work hard, we will stay united and we will succeed.
- Education gives us knowledge, confidence and freedom.
Corrigé grands discours : textes et production
Correction de l’exercice 6 : Analyser un extrait- The speaker is Winston Churchill, the British Prime Minister.
- « We shall fight » is repeated.
- It is repeated four times.
- « Never » : we shall never surrender casse la répétition et forme la chute.
- He wants to give them courage and determination.
- Hannah is speaking. She is fifteen.
- The youth club closed.
- « Where do we go now after school? »
- « We care about our town, we care about our friends and we care about our future. » (ou : To the streets. To our screens. To nowhere.)
- « We are not asking for money; we are asking for a place. »
- She wants the council to open the club again.
- Let’s protect our planet.
- Let’s stand together.
- Let’s build a better school.
- Let’s listen to young people.
- Let’s speak up for girls’ education.
Après Let’s, on emploie toujours la base verbale, sans to.
- He gave (delivered) a very moving speech.
- The crowd cheered him.
- She wants to convince her audience.
- We shall never surrender. (ou We will never surrender.)
- Together, we can change the world.
- The tone of the speech is hopeful.
- L’orateur a marqué une pause avant la dernière phrase.
- Le public s’est levé et a applaudi.
- Ses paroles ont donné de l’espoir aux gens.
- Elle a parlé pour ceux qui ne peuvent pas parler.
- Oui, nous le pouvons.
Exemple de discours :
- Hello everyone, my name is Lucas and I want to be your class representative.
- Why do we always have to wait twenty minutes at the canteen?
- I will talk to the head teacher about it.
- I want a calmer, cleaner and happier school.
- Together, we can make our voices heard.
- So let’s vote for change!
Comment progresser après ce corrigé
Choisis un des extraits du cours et lis-le à voix haute trois fois en marquant les pauses et en accentuant les mots-clés. Enregistre-toi : tu entendras vite si ton rythme est trop plat. Ensuite, reprends ton discours de délégué, ajoute une répétition et un contraste, et présente-le en moins d’une minute. Ces procédés te serviront aussi à l’oral du brevet.

